[Digital-health-wg] [29th Aug] Review of the 1st issue paper draft_PHM Digital Health Working Group Meeting

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To our dear working group members, 

Hope all is well with you.
I’d like to thank you for making valuable contribution to our issue paper, and wouldn’t be possible without your support. 
We are at the final stage of 1st issue paper, and would like to invite your comments and edits on the paper.  If you want to add a chapter, please feel free to do so. 
Below is the link to the draft, and you’re free to make changes online. 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1x83D2Plq4vKAol6N06yMo8pCaZf5MTuzAavGMwEdfzo/edit?usp=sharing <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1x83D2Plq4vKAol6N06yMo8pCaZf5MTuzAavGMwEdfzo/edit?usp=sharing> 

Some changes have been made since the last version, I’ve merged some of the chapters to make mapping more clear or where it was difficult to pinpoint the specific cases to allocate. Also, some issues - such as benefit sharing - I believe would suit better in our 2nd working paper which deals with analytical framework and principles. 

Proposed date for revision is 29th Aug, and I’ll make the final edits and share with you by 31st Aug. So hopefully by our next WG meeting, we will have final version of the 1st issue paper and ready for approval within our group. 

If you have any suggestion, please let me know. 
Regards
Junho 
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